Sunday, 10 February 2013

Chapter 2 : Disaster Struck??

   I sat alone in the backyard of my house. A few more weeks and summer holiday was about to begin. I sighed and went back inside as it began to drizzle..

  After half an hour it began to pour. I was stuck inside on this supposely lovely Saturday afternoon. I sat on the couch watching television with Clementine. Louis came on my lap. Laying on the couch watching tv wasn't so bad at all except for the rain had bother me. After an hour of television, the rain had stopped but it was still drizzling. I went out with Louis . Louis was my trusty male dog with a bright misxture of red and black collar. It costs 20$ , me and Clementine had saved up our savings for 2 weeks to afford it.

  Louis took care of it just finely. I put my knee high boots, it was my all time favourite just the way I like it. The grass was really muddy after the rain so I walked down the path instead. I noticed a young teen boy sitting on a bench with his blue-ish cap covering his face. He looked so familiar ! I step closer . " Iriyi ?? ," 

  Iriyi went off startled and said the f word.  I laughed histrically as he got up into place. By the moment I stopped he  was already  staring at me. " You laugh like a dork," he said. " Yeah I know," I agreed. " What are you doing here anyway? It's pouring down rain here like maybe just now?," I asked.
" WELL, I got really really bored and you were not around to fool with so I hang out in the park but I fell asleep then," he answered. I laughed then shoved my umbrella at him. " You're soaking wet ," I exclaimed. " Yeah I know that," he said and got up.

  We walked back to his house. " I"ll go change ," he said as he went upstairs. His house was gorgeous. It was just a few minutes but he was down already. " Like it ?," he asked. " It's beautiful,"
" I have to get back ," I said. " Okay ,"    Before I head for the door, he gave me another flower. Violets. I accepted it and waved goodbye before I left his house. Louis was already waging it's tail impatiently. I walked off with Louis and there goes my day.

 There went a crash. I looked out the window. There was Patricia laying on the grass, she looked like she was badly hurted. The other cheerleaders dragged her in. " Omygosh Patricia ... what happened??." I asked anxiously. She shouted in pain. " She broke her leg," answered one of the other cheerleaders.  I called for the head mistress. She was sent to the hospital soon enough.  I turned back to the five cheerleaders. " What actually happen? ," I asked. The girls were quiet.

 " What happen to Patricia ??," I asked again. " She pushed Larine then the rest of us came down . Eventually Patricia.," said one of them. " Who is the she," I asked. " It was Louisa okay ! It stinks to say her name and at the same time talking to who's her best buddy  !," she screamed. I wanted to apologise but Iriyi grabbed me before I could. " Iriyi what are you doing here? ," I asked. "Shush. I'm stealing you," he said.

 He dragged me to the balcony. I sat down then sighed. " I can't believe it how could she do that?," I muttered loud enough for Iriyi to hear. " You know it's not necessary for you to believe in other people's words," he said. I let down my head. " I know that and it seems so unbelievable. But something keeps telling me lies don't hide," " That's true ," he agreed with me.

 The day ended when I found out my best friend had done something terrible. I sighed , how I could I sleep when I know what my best friend had done.

  I walked into school. A group of girls surrounded me soon enough. It was the rest of the cheerleaders except Patricia was not there. " We want to get revenge ," one of them said. " But I'm not Louisa," " The think is , you're Louisa's friend and she's not here. So we'll have to beat you up instead," she said.  They grabbed my hand . I struggled for freedom but it didn't worked. They pushed me at the step of the staircase. I was definetly going to fall. Bye world.

 " You shouldn't be thinking of negatif things you know.. Ouch,"  I open my eyes. I was in Iriyi's arms . I blushed and got off. " I'm so sorry !," I apologised. I looked at his arm, it was kind of twisted. I dragged him to the infirmary. " You shouldn't have gone off t save me," I said as I bandage his arm. " Well I wouldn't want my girlfriend to be injured you know," he said. I blushed. " I'm not your girlfriend ! ," " I didn't want you to lose your memory...,"he said. " Go to class," I said as I pushed him out the door. " Okay okay , girlfriend," 

 The door of my class opened. A girl with long hair came in.

" Hey ! It's ......

To be continue....

Thursday, 7 February 2013

Chapter 1 = The mystery guy

  There was a drip of blood on my hand. I shivered and look around. No one was here or appear. My heart beated faster and faster. I ran as fast as I could. I then heard tapping noises. It was the tapping on the wall. I lost my breath . I had to stop. It was dark , not one light switch was found. I felt a cold breeze on my cheek. I shivered in fright. Someone was touching me, I moved some steps backwards. " You thought you could get away , didn't you?" an unfamiliar voice said. Then it chuckled an evil laugh.

  Then I realised I was only having a nightmare. I also realise I had a bump on my head. " Ouch... it's gonna be forever to heal," I muttered as I head for the door. I sighed.

"Pop quiz today! ," someone exclaimed as I reached the school gate. I shrugged then turned around." Are you alright Liliana? Need to see the nurse? ," asked the 14 year old girl. " I'm fine Loui.. I just ate the wrong thing today," I said. Then along the way, Louisa kept asking stuff so I made an expression then split. " Hey...what if..," " Hey..," said Louisa.

   Seniors passing by . " I've been ignored,"  " I'm right here Loui," I said from behind  a wall next to her locker. "Thank goodness Juliana. I thought you left me all alone,"she said. But before I knew it , she left me too as in an equal fight. Before I knew it I was dragged to the infirmary which was just a few steps far away. " Miss , Juliana's gone down with a fever," Louisa exclaimed. "What??," I muttered lou enough for Louisa to hear. I shook my head. The nurse sat me down and placed the thermometer in my mouth.It beep. " 37.5 degrees you have a fever," the nurse said. " Well Juliana , you'll have to skip class and rest here till your mom fetch you,"the nurse continued.
 
  I was fine what could get me a fever? Cold breeze? A shower of cold ice by accident? " Don't worry . Just stay here . I'll explain to the teacher," said Louisa. She winked . " Thanks," I shouted. " For sending me where I would miss class and my sweet tofee that Clara would give me," I muttered after on. " You shouldn't skip meals Iriyi. It's bad," said the nurse several minutes later. " Yeah. Sorry about that," the teen boy said. The nurse went off to the cupboard while the boy sat on a bed opposite next to mine. I pull the sheet of quilt up then turned over . He couldn't notice me now but  I guess I was still obvious. Then side of struck he asked me. " You didn't think I couldn't see you there didn't you? " I groaned. I sat up. " What do you want ? ,"  I asked . Iriyi was my friend , an annoying one from the second grade. I got up and walk out to the door.

  He grabbed my hand before I could. " What do you want? Do I owe you?,"I asked rudely. " Hey beauty queen, aren't you sick ? ," he said then put me down on the bed." I guess I am,"
I laid on the bed but holded up higher than usual. I was shivering. " Miss could you turn the air-corn down? Juliana's shivering," he exclaimed. What does he have to be concerned about?? He turned to me. " Are you okay?"  I wanted to say something but I had blackened out somehow.

  Everything was dark once again. I heard someone chuckled again. It was the same voice. " Hello??," I said. My voice echoed. Before I knew it , I was chained . I didn't know how to get out. It was tight. You don't know how it hurts or how it feels." Ouch," I muttered. There was an evil laugh again. It was like even more evil. There was a chain saw , a big one. In front of me, there was also a spotlight a bright one." Great , how evil more can you get," I muttered. Before I knew it my chain was broken but the chain saw kept going . It was going to cut me in half.  " Help !!!," I shouted.

  " Lili! ," said the twelve year old girl. " What happen??? ," she asked panicly. I had my breath lost at stake... I breath in a few times. " Cle? What are you doing here ? You got school ! Most importantly how did I get here??," I asked frustrately. " Slow down Lili. You're at the hospital. I came to visit you. You happy?," she said. " Oh yeah, sure," I said.

  " How on earth did I get here anyway? ," I asked. " teen boy brought you here. Omygosh you have to tell me his name! He's so damn gorgeous! ," the girl said excitely." Calm down . We'll talk about this another day," I said.  It couldn't be him could it?

  The next day I had to go to school. How frustrating but I like going to school and I had to talk to Iriyi. " Liliana? OMG You're back ! That's just so great. I copy notes for you . Here," Louisa said as she passed me some papers with yesterday's notes and excercises." Miss beauty queen , you slack too much," bullied Victoria.  " Do you have to ," I asked. " Whats' say is my decision," she scolded then walked off. " I always get complicated with her. What did she meant??," said Louisa.

  I went to my locker and got my books out. " Look miss beauty queen's back," exclaimed Iriyi. I groaned. " Thanks," I said then walk off. " All I get is a thank??" he asked. " What do you want? ," I said. " I'll think about it ," he said but I had already walked off. But I heard his " I'll think about it " sentence... what a loser am I..

  Iriyi suprised me at break. He was standing behind a tree I was sitting under. " Hey , beauty queen," he said. " Can you stop calling me that n me??," I asked . " Alright . I tell you this that I think about it," he said. " I want you.. ,"  Everything went black before he could finish. " Not this time...," he said.

  " Oh no .. not here again...," I muttered.  I was in flames this time. Surrounded nothing but fire. I drop to the ground. The temperature was boiling...steaming hot. I didn't know what to do. " Help!!!," I shouted once again. Someone grabbed hold of my hand. We were running. " Thank you , " I said. " But who are you? ," I asked. Once at the moment  I asked , the person was gone. I stopped. I wasn't surrounded by fire but water. I was about to drown. Something or someone was pulling me deeper. I was about to loose my breath. I tried swimming upward, it didn't help.. I lost my breath. It was the end.

  " Liliana!?," " Are you alright? This is the second time ," exclaimed Iriyi. " Glad you got the name right," I said. " Are you alright?? ," he asked once again. " I'm fine," I said.  " I want to go out," I said as I got up. " Are you fine enough?," he asked. The flash make me spin I dropped on the ground.  Iriyi had to carry me out. Finanly we were outside. In the garden. The breeze was perfect. I sat on the grass and Iriyi did too.  " I thought that I had to plan it but it was plan already," he said. " Plan?," I asked in confusion.

  " Yes, plan for you to go out for me but it has already been planned," he said then smiled sheepishly at me. I hit him. " You're so playful with the mind," I complimented. He smiled again. His smile was nice . It make the day even more special. " Let me show you a trick," he said. He click his finger and appear a rose. He gave it to me. I smelled it . It was pa day to thanks" I said as I blushed. " No need to thank me , I got what I want," he said.

  It was a day to remember... the day when I fell in love.

~ Florence Jordan

CHAPTER 1. Chapter 2 in progress



 

 

Wednesday, 6 February 2013

Helo helo helo ~

I know I haven't been posting lately but I'll be starting a new story call The Diary of My Love Story.

I'm working on it and I might post it so.. I may create a new page ~

Happy days guys ~~!!!

Friday, 25 January 2013

Hello readers, it's been a long time since  I have last written. I would like to ask you readers how is my story ? Please tell me . I am in need to know your opinions.

Regards,
Florence Jordan

Friday, 21 December 2012

Chapter 7 : I got what I want.

" Hey"

" Hi Blue ."

" What happen to my brother?"

" He's your brother ? ......He got a tummy ache. Is it usual?"

" No.... it isn't."

"......"

" Teacher , may I go back to the lodge?," requested Viola.

" Sure ! Be careful dear !"

" I should follow you.."

" There's no need , you have to accompany Star. She'll be alone."

" But you're going back alone "

" I'll be fine. Just go on."

* Grabs Viola hand

" Promise me you'll be safe."

" Promise"

* Slowly lets go of hand....

- I still have feelings for her ..... * looks up into the sky.

Back at the lodge,

" Hey Iryri , you alright?"

" Yeah , cause you're here to accompany me." * smiles

" Thought you might be bored , all alone here"

" Haha , thanks "

Weeks had passed , life in Elementary was awesome.

" Viola , wanna hang out by the garden this evening ?"

" Sure!"

Elementary Flower Rose.

" It feels good , I feel lucky to be in this school . Don't you agree Iryri?"

" Yeah , I met lots of friends and my grades were good."

** Silents......

* Plucks a rose.

" Viola....."

" Hmm?"

" Will you be my girlfriend?"

* Surprise......

" But will you agree on my condition."

" What's that "

" Never leave me"

" Forever and ever I will keep to that rule ."

* smiles .

* hugs ..

" Hm , thanks for the rose."

" Anything for my girlfriend"

* Smiles..


" Hey , sweetheart . Where ya get the rose?," asks Bella.

" From someone."

* Arranges it into a vase , waters it.

" Seems like you take good care of it....hmmm , ouwww . A boy gave it to you."

" Think whatever you like girl."

" Oh.... I know . Iryri isn' it ?"

* Viola blushes

" Haha . I knew it . You were sneaking out together weren't you . That's why you said you were busy didn't you ?"

-poke- -poke-

" Hey , stop it!"

- Since Viola got a boyfriend.... there is no way she'll stop me from getting Blue again...
* evil laugh..

To be continue......

--
Florence Jordan.








Chapter 6 : Tragedy never stops. Is there a problem?

- My plan suspiciously has gone well . With the help of  Viola's attitude.....

Elementary Garden. 6.oo p.m.

" It's a nice view..."

" It's my favorite spot , I think of it as the most relaxing spot ,"

" I agree "

9:oo p.m..

Iryri- Viola's a special girl.... she's sweet and friendly. She sweeter than sweets.

Viola- Blue was kinda busy lately. We haven't talked in ages. Iryri's friendly. He truly reminds me of Blue... but he's not Blue.

* Brink !

# wanna walk to school together tomorrow ?

".........."

- I did kinda promise Iryri.... I better not break my promises. Mama says it's bad....

# Sorry, made a promise to walk with someone else.

# it's alright.... good night.

6:45a.m.

" Good morning."

" Hi ! Morning ! "

" You're looking cheerful today."

"I got a secret and it's secret alright..."

" Haha... you've got to tell me . I can't stand secrets."

" It's secret and it will stay like that till Miss Veronica tells you."

" Oh , come on. I'm curious."

Coming back to Star and Blue.

Downhill , not far from classroom,

" Can you be serious about our relationship? ," asks Star.

Blue silents

" I'm asking you a question Blue."

" Come on tell me !," said Iryri.

* tickles Viola.

 the two of them falls down hill

" Argh ! ," said Viola as she sees Blue and Star.

" Sorry !"

" Hey brother , you should have told me you've got a girlfriend!," said Iryri.

Blue silents and the rest three too.

* Star pokes Blue.

Blue does a funny expression , ` What?

" Dating secretly , I get it . Come one Iryri, don't bug them ."

" Haha , good luck bro !"

When two two friends left,

Star: * blushes hardly.

" Class is starting soon .  See you later."

- It's all Viola's fault once again!
 This time . She'll regret it.

3 days later,

7:oo a.m.

" Now kids , line up and into the bus . No pushing !"

In the bus,

" Haha , now I get the surprise. "

" Haha , I never been to a tour around this town before.... Hmm what's Newton like ?

" I never been there before but I for one thing I have to be clear with you ."

" What's that?"

" No more secrets !"

* the both giggles.

The bus was mixed with different grades and pairs of girls and boys.

Blue: - maybe I don't have a chance at all.
          maybe she's chosen Iryri after all.

* watching the both of them from back . envy.

1:3op.m.

* spreads some chemicals into food.

2:oop.m.

" URgh !"

" Iryri , what's wrong ??"

" Stomach... painful.. too..."

" Somebody ! Help ! "

) Iryri was sent back.

- Hope he's okay....

-- Hahaha....it's working...

" Gather kids ! Next stop !"

- Urm.....
 ) Viola alone ....

To be continue.....

Thanks viewers ! =)

regards: Florence.




Thursday, 20 December 2012

Chapter 5 : Life is hard to change

" Hey , Blue ! Haven't seen you in a while !," said Viola.

" Yeah.."

" Hmm.. Elementary Boarding school..... since I haven't been here in a while could you show me the way?," asks Viola.

" No need for that... meet me at the park . I'm going to that boarding too."

Viola:*smiles

New York , Viola's house 1:00p.m.

" Viola , we have to go shopping for your uniform. Please get ready , dear," called out Aunt Veronica.

" Oh, sure."

Green Valley Mall

" It's been a while, friend...." said an unknown voice

Viola:Huh?

"Tsk Tsk Tsk Tsk.. Viola how could you have forgotten me?"

" Whho.. are you?"

" Why it's just an old friend from Green Dale."

" Star? Is that you?"

" Bingo! You know me just shopping around for uniforms too . As well as I know, you will be   needing the  uniforms which I'm gonna use."

" You're going Elementary Boarding School aren't you."

" Who knows?"
* Star walks off .


Blue house.

" I'm late ! Mom where our tickets ?," asks Blue's brother.

" Oh , I left them in my bag ..."

" Forget it I'll get it myself"

" Got mine , by mom . Love ya! ," called out Blue.

" Bye mom ! See ya next 3 months.

New York Central Park, 6:45 a.m.

" Oh hey ! You're here earlier than me."

" I don't wanna be late Blue * smiles ," says Viola.

" We have to go to the train station.... luckily it's near."

" HEY ! How could you have forgotten me ?," shouts a boy.

" Oh ! Jason. Sorry"

Jason: * feeling annoyed

" You should be quick then "

" No boy like me should leave le hair untidy "

" But you took an hour to do it in the bathroom and all you needed was a 5 minute brush !"

* Blue giggles

" Hey what's so funny ?"

" Nothing," answers Blue then giggles.

" Come on !"

Le Train On Board, 7:00a.m.

" Tickets!," said a woman with a gloomy voice

*Viola giggles.

" Hmm, seat D 14," murmurs Viola.

* Uff " Sorry. Hand luggage... heavy."

" Haha, it's alright."

* Urgh !

" Miss  I guess he end up ' not' sitting with you.."

" No ! It can't be ! I set them up . How the heck could he be sitting next to Viola ? We were daters!," said Star angrily.

" Hey.. .. Blue, you're in my seat."

" Excuse me ? "

" You took the the wrong ticket. Your name's on this ticket."

" Yeah , okay ."

* moves and the guy takes the place.

Star- Haha , I knew it . My plan would never fail.

 " Hand luggage up please !"

" Here .. let me help," offers the guy.

" Thanks * smiles"

1 hour later,

" Umm , by the way... I'm Iryri. Iryri Deatheart.

Viola : * smiles  Name's Viola . Viola Pembrooke.

* chattering.

Blue- Huh?
       Like since when my brother knows how to joke around .... * feeling annoyed .

" Blue... Did you really meant what you did that other day ? ," asks Star.

" Huh ? What other day ? ," Blue asks suspiciously.

" Um.. nothing . I guess something just got in my mind .."

" Oh"

Star- How could he forget ? It was the best moment of our lives !
         Viola... Ugh !

" Haha .. it's great to know you !  Maybe we will be in the same class this year ? "

" Maybe ! ," says Iriyi.

" Nice meeting you !"

Assemble,

" Hah.. you found a soul mate to replace Blue eh?," compliments Star

" He's not my soul mate ! We're just friends."

" Tsk, Tsk , Tsk. You just wait and see"
* disappears from crowd 

- Ugh! She also misunderstand people !

" Hey , what's up"

" Iriyi? Omygosh ! We meet again !,"

" Hey , Viola . We're the same age . Of course the same class? "

* giggles

" Can we be friends? ," asks Viola.

" Hey no problem , best friends ?"

*smiles " Sure"

 Iriyi and Viola have been good friends since then.

Star has been trying to fix their relationship with Blue.



Next following days,

" Hey seems like we bump into a pretty lady. Hehe.," said a guy from an upper grade.

" Sorry the principal called me," answers Viola.

* Grabs Viola hand. " Uh oh , you don't wanna make the boss mad do you.

* Group giggles.

" HELP ! Someone !"

Iriyi: - Viola????

* rushes to the voice.

" Let Viola go ! ," exclaimed Iriyi.

" Iriyi?? "

" Oh so this pretty lady is Viola , what a nice ring ."

" Let go of her !"

* attacks one of the group members.

" Let go of her !"

" I don't think so .."

" What do you think you are doing Fin ? ," asks the principal

" Uh nothing. * let go of Viola hands.

* Viola backs away...

" Miss ! He was bullying me ! "

" Now Fin? Detention room "

" Aww man"

" Hey  Iriyi, thanks... "

* Smiles " No problem"

" Anything I could do for you ?," offers Viola*smiles

" How 'bout go accompany me this evening ? "

" Sure !"

* Walks together back to classes.

" Hey Viola , want to join me for dinner?," asks Blue.

" Um, sorry Blue . I have to go with Iriyi . I hope you don't mind..."

" No . It's okay.

To be continue...


regards: Florence
P.S. please , I accept compliments.